Feedback in class

 We need to stay focused on what the brief is asking for:

- a digital product

-our light and infrastructure ideas are going away from what the brief is looking for

-Trying to do to much, need to keep it grounded in realism and something that would be viable

Aim in our proposal needs to explain what the product will do not what our problem is, could add parts into our synopsis. Aim should be around 2/3 lines

With ui design the product needs to be straight forward and easy to read with graphics, people don't want to read a lot of text

Remove understanding the problem from objectives

Should say testing instead of prototyping

We need to look into design ideas

Our objectives come across like a conversation rather than clear and concise objectives