Feedback on Research Presentation, 7th November 2023 - Katie

• Don't just read your notes, attempt to memorise what you're going to say. This stops you from falling over your words, losing your place and getting stressed out about your stumbles. 
• Practise more so that we don't go overtime. 
• Arrangement of text on Slide 2 is awkward. 
• Use a simpler typeface. 
• Aim was to the point, but the use imagery is awkward. 
• Don't use clip art-- it makes your presentation look less professional.
• Don't use an image of a smartwatch-- use a bracelet or wristband to expand the viewer's idea of what the prototype could look like instead of making assumptions.
• The layout of Slide 7 through 9 is awkward. It makes it harder to understand the information being displayed. 
• Expand on our objectives. 
• Don't call it our final "pitch"-- it's our final "presentation."
• We need to be specific and to the point about we plan to do when we discuss our Next Step. 
• Two areas of research that we didn't look at that are relevant when we start developing prototypes:
• Haptic Technology 
• UX and UI Design